Thursday 2 August 2012

Come With Me

Come With Me exists in two forms. one as an original script format for university, the other as an attempt at a present for girlfriend. Neither worked


Come With Me

ACT 1 SCENE 1

INSIDE A HOSPITAL ROOM, JOHN SITS UPSTAGE MIDDLE WHILE HIS WIFE CLARA LAYS ON A HOSPITAL BED CENTRE STAGE. THERE IS A HEART MONITOR NEXT TO THE BED WITH A STEADY BEEPING RTHYMN
A NURSE IS STANDING UPSTAGE LEFT

JOHN              It’s not fair…

CLARA          Life isn’t sweetie

JOHN              Well it bloody well should be! I don’t want to loose you… (stifles a sob)

CLARA          Please don’t cry, I can’t bear it. All the things I wanted to do with you… All that time gone down to stupid chance

JOHN              A year… it’s not fair! A year isn’t nearly enough time for me to spend with you, I love you so much.

CLARA          (Starts to breathe raggedly) I don’t want to die without you!

HEART RATE STARTS TO QUICKEN

JOHN              Oh no don’t die! Please not yet! Not ever!

CLARA          Come with me!

JOHN              (Pause) What? I… I can’t…

CLARA          Please John come with me! I don’t want to be alone wherever I go!

JOHN IS LOST FOR WORDS

CLARA          (In tears) Don’t leave me! I love you and I don’t wanna be without you!

JOHN              (mumbles) I’m afraid

CLARA          So am I! But I just want to be with you forever! Don’t you?

JOHN              I…

CLARA          Come with me! Please!

CLARA STARTS TO GASP FOR BREATH; HER HEARTBEAT QUICKENS FASTER THEN FLAT LINES. THE NURSE STEPS TO THE BED.

NURSE           Time of death, Ten past one pm (PAUSES THEN TURNS TO THE SOBBING JOHN) I’m sorry… My grandmother died of cancer

ACT 1 SCENE 2

TOM SITS ON A PUB STOOL MIDDLE STAGE LEFT SIPPING HIS PINT AND READING A NEWSPAPER EVERY SO OFTEN CHECKING HIS WATCH.
JOHN ENTERS STAGE RIGHT AND WALKS OVER TO TOM LOOKING DISHEVELED. IN THE BACKGROUND “love will tear us apart” (by joy division) IS PLAYING

JOHN              Oh sorry I’m late, I was…umh… I’m sorry I forgot alright? But at least I’m here.

JOHN SITS ON AN OPPOSITE STOOL

TOM               Not like the last three times (SMIRKS) but it’s alright, I mean, how long was it since I last saw you?

JOHN              Four months.

TOM               Since. (IS CUT OFF)

JOHN              Yeah…

TOM               (PAUSES) You been keeping busy then?

JOHN              Not really…

TOM               (SIGHES) Uhh… Pint?

JOHN              Yeah sure

TOM STANDS AND WALKS OFF STAGE BRIEFLY WHILE JOHN SITS ON THE STOOL LOOKING UNCOMFORTABLE. AFTER A MOMENT TOM RETURNS WITH THE PINT

TOM               There you go mate, don’t worry, this one’s on me (PAUSE) so… you ok? You holding up alright?

JOHN              You know what? I’m not, this is the first time I’ve left the house for something other than shopping and work. (JOHN QUICKLY DRINKS A LARGE PORTION OF HIS PINT)

TOM               Ah shit….I’m sorry mate

JOHN              What for? It’s not like it’s your fault is it?

TOM               Well… You know, I could have been more tactful…that’s all I’m sayin..

JOHN              Well don’t say! … I’m sorry, I shouldn’t be snapping at you… How have you been?

TOM               Oh you know, work work work. I got a new Gir (DROPS OFF) nevermind…

JOHN              You don’t have to walk on eggshells… yeah I still hurt… I still hurt a lot but I’m dealing with it (HE FINISHES HIS PINT)

TOM               Well that’s good, I just wanna make sure your alright mate…

JOHN              You know the last thing she said to me?

TOM               What?

JOHN              She said “Come with me”…

TOM               Well… she was scared, I don’t blame her.

JOHN              Yeah, me neither.

TOM NODS AND DRINKS, THEN PAUSES

TOM               I know that tone… Your not thinking?

JOHN              Tom I would be with her now if I wasn’t a coward.

TOM               You’re not a coward mate…and (IS CUT OFF)

JOHN              I fucking am! I don’t want to live without her but I’m too scared to die!

TOM               Mate! What about all the other things in your life? Your family?

JOHN              She mattered more than my family, I know that sounds harsh but it’s true!

TOM               You could meet someone else… she’d want you to move on.

JOHN              You don’t know shit!

TOM               Well… I… I cant really say “Go ahead mate, need a hand offing yourself?” can I?

JOHN              I know… I know…

TOM               Just… don’t do anything rash ok?

JOHN              If rash was what I’m like I would have done it the day after she…

TOM               Well… just don’t mate? And would you do me a favour?

JOHN              What?

TOM               See a doctor? I mean a head-doctor?

JOHN              Maybe

TOM               Please?

JOHN              Listen… I’ve got to go

TOM               You only just got here!

JOHN              yeah well… I need to get home.

TOM               Alright… seeya mate

JOHN LEAVES STAGE RIGHT WITHOUT REPLYING AND TOM PICKS UP HIS PAPER AND READS AGAIN.


And now the prose format 

Come With Me

The Novel

























                John was thinking about things. About the past. About the future. Whatever John was thinking, it was to avoid thinking about the present. The midday sun was timidly poking through the curtains of the flat. Thin slices of light flittered about the detritus of the fetid room. The television was stuck on a twenty-four hour news channel, as it had been the day before and the day before that. Not that John was paying any attention, just a source of noise to block out the terrible silence that seemed to fill what was once their home.
                John was thinking about two divergent possibilities. The one that had already happened and the one that could have been. Where his and Clara’s paths could have split and they would have never been, they could have never met, never got on, had some falling out and broken up. All of which seemed a much brighter possibility “Such is the benefit of Hindsight” John thought to himself. John’s flat hadn’t been cleaned in months, not properly at least, there was no stink of rotting food or discarded human matter tossed aside carelessly. The problem with the flat was it had become stale, like a mausoleum without the dead. The amber drink in John’s tumbler was tilting as the third drink since he awoke was taking its affect, calling him into the numb sleep. The answering machine light flittered on and off, full of unheard messages that bore no meaning to John any more.
John’s mind swung from the possibilities of an alternate world back into reality, and what was real, what had really happened and how it had shattered his idyllic life.

*

John strode across the university campus. The bare trees were showing the slightest signs of leaves and life, the winter miasma that spreads over any academic institution was lifting as the days were getting longer. Students had begun to sporadically populate the lawns and benches that decorate the campus, although they were still clothed in jumpers and coats, the dawn of spring instilled the will and the life to end their voluntary hibernation. It was the final year for John and he was approaching it with a mix of emotions, the finality to his youth and the encroaching adulthood was met with a sense of fearful excitement, the same fearful excitement of waiting for a rollercoaster, the thrills and the scares mixed into a tight ball in the pit of your stomach.
John had a destination and a purpose. Go to the student union bar, meet Alexandra (or Alley as she prefer) and drink as many noxious liquids as their bodies and wallets could handle. Alexandra was John’s best friend from college and it was a no coincidence that they had attended the same university, John had chosen to study Law at Manchester and Alexandra had decided to study Sociology at Manchester Met. While John was leading their friendship, the shared benefit of this move to the same city granted them the benefit of having someone to rely on in a strange and large city.

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